in the 80s a man had a big TV
'i wanna sit here all day" once thought he
and so he did, for many days
actually... for all those years
and now his body outgrew his flatscreeen buddy

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  1. This is not a limerick. It could've been if only you had respected the format: the number of syllables and stresses in each line. Also, 'buddy' doesn't rhyme with the other two unless you put stess on the last syllable, like in French.

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